Gift of the Phoenix Review

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 3-and-Half-Star-Review-Rating

 

 

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Comments: Okay I will start with the bad points just to get them out of the way. One thing, there was a few spots where double words showed up. Example: I will will be going with you. It is a simple editing problem just needs a good once over. Another thing there was a lot of telling of the story over showing. I did a lot of this in my first book. It distracted me a couple times, but for the most part it didn’t bother me.

Now for the good stuff!

I really liked the story and I was pulled into the characters lives. The ending was a tad predictable,but still enjoyable. It is an epic journey of good vs evil on a world full of hidden magics. I like the use of the phoenix as the source of the magic and its role it plays on the world. I liked the mystery of the stones and the power they contain. Slowly throughout the story the stones powers come into play and the characters use of that power. It seemed like a good balance through the story. I gave 5 stars for the use of characters. It’s just my opinion, but I really liked them and felt a connection. I believe a good book is one that entertains you, that is the most important thing over everything else. Gift of the Phoenix entertained me.

I give it 3 1/2 stars overall

IMO: A good book that I think people would enjoy.

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Game of Thrones Season 3

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4 and half stars

 

I would have to say Game of Thrones Season 3 is keeping me glued to my seat. Peter Dinklage is my favorite actor in the series. I kinda wish I had read the books before I started watching the series, but since I am already through the first two seasons and deep into the third, I don’t think I will be reading them. (It’s just my thing.) Okay on to the review…

The story, the actors and the movie backgrounds, all top notch. At first I thought I wouldn’t like it, but now I sincerely love it! I like the way there are a great number of kings, each area has their own ruler. All the areas have a king, but there is 1 king that rules over all of them and it seems, all want the throne for themselves. Lots of deception, lots of hatred between the clans or houses as they are called. Sometimes it is hard to follow, but if you follow it closely it all pans out.

I give it 4 1/2 stars…5 stars if it was easier to follow.

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Defiance Review

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three stars

I gave Defiance 3 stars mostly because of the beginning plot. The alien refugees needed a new home and wanted to coexist with humans. Problem with the opening pilot was they really didn’t explain it. They might in future episodes, but the pilot left a lot of unanswered questions. I know a lot of the plot from the game so I had a head start.

It’s hard to drum up new ideas so most of the time the story has ideas from other shows or books. Defiance has a cookie cutter look to it, in as it looks like a lot of other SiFi shows. Some of the aliens look good while others look like Jim Henson rejects. I don’t want to be too harsh yet because I do like it, but if the story doesn’t pick up in the next few episodes, I believe it will flop. Just my opinion.

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Defiance

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Looks like a good show. I will give a review on it as soon as it air’s. I’m playing the game and it’s pretty good, but needs more content. That always happens with new games though.

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My first mask is almost ready.

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The sculpture part is done. This weekend I am making the plaster casting and maybe pour the latex. I will post another picture later when I have the latex mask made.

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August is Done!

 

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Sorry I haven’t posted much lately. I have been so busy I just didn’t have time, but now that August is done I will have more time. I still have to wait for the chapter edits then a final edit before it can be published. I will finish Gift of the Phoenix as soon as possible so I can give the review, so far it is a good read. Thanks to everyone that follows my blog, to you and everyone else have a great holiday weekend.

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If your a self published author you need to read this!

http://www.jamiemcguire.com/amazon-beautiful-disaster-emails

She got published and Amazon is asking people to ask for a refund of the self published books that were already sold. Click on the link to read more.

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Gift of the Phoenix by Donna Cook

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Gift of the Phoenix will be my next review. Check back to see updates and as always…thanks for coming. :)

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Review of The Long Walk by Stephen King

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 4 and half stars

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The Long Walk starts out a story of a group of boys entering a contest. Each one must out walk the others and keep on walking till only one remains. That last walker gets his hearts desire, any wish is fulfilled. Doesn’t sound like Stephen King does it? Lol He always has a twist, something to blast your mind and your thoughts wrap around his storyline like a boa squeezing its prey. In a regular contest if you couldn’t walk any farther you just bow out. In the long walk if the boys slow down too much they get a warning, if they get three warnings the soldiers following the group raise their rifles until the forth, there is no warning. You buy a ticket. Yes you heard me right you buy a ticket, the soldiers pull the trigger and the walker dies. Only one walker makes it to the end the rest die.

Now before you brow beat me you learn that almost immediately in the book. Now I can walk a long way, I think most of us can, but not without resting or stretching.  The soldiers give you a warning every thirty seconds so there is no resting. You have to keep a steady pace which the soldiers monitor also, if you slow down too much you get a warning. How long could you walk if you couldn’t stop to rest or even slow down. The fear of death is a good motivator, you would keep on walking because you had to. The story turns to the lives of several walkers and their struggles through the walk. Some form friendships and have their little groups and others are loners. Stephen King digs deep into their emotions along the way, emotions and thoughts like “Why did I do this?” The contestants are not forced to enter, each one has to pass a physical and a mental evaluation. If they get picked, it was because they wanted to be in the race, so why did they enter? That is the storyline, why. What would drive you to enter a contest that only one person would survive. Money? Fame?

The story progresses, diving into their lives before the race and through the race. Dealing with the people around them getting shot on a regular basis, which only heightens the fear of their own death. Its a long walk through life in a short span of time. I work in a nursing home and I see the end of peoples lives. They way he describes some of the people turning into mindless walking zombies, walking on will alone. Their faces become blank and lifeless, their eyes stare off into nothingness. It creeped me out because the way he described it reminded me of the despair I see in the elderly. Some of them stare right through you as if they can see into the beyond.

I gave this book 4 1/2 stars, it would have been 5 but I think the end could have been different. Not better because I understand why he ended it the way he did, IMO the end should have been a bit longer and in more detail. As in most Stephen King books he ends it this way. It usually bugs me but he is still my favorite writer and I have become accustomed to it.

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August is halfway done!

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August is over halfway done. Woohoo! I am still looking at April for publishing but it could take till May. I am really excited about this book and hope everyone enjoys reading it.

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